Eternity's End

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Eternity's End

Post by Star_Raider15 » Sun, 13. Aug 06, 10:52

Prologue: A Dreams Beginning


In the year 532 the most wealthiest and most powerfull corporation in the X-Universe at the time, Hellodon Corporation had decided to found a nation among the stars and govern its own destiny.
In the year of 536 the gigantic colonial fleet had gathered in an unknown sector that now ,goes by the name of Danna’s Chance, and began its long journey in the search of a new home.
Trough many perils they went but the sheer power of their will to make a nation among the stars pushed them ever forward into the darkness of the universe.
Many years had passed since the fleet’s departure and the families of the fleet began to grow ever restless at the prospect of not finding a home and wandering blindly into space in the search of something that apparently did not exist. Until one day when an exploration probe returned from a 5 day journey and reported that he had found what they were looking for: a sector far away from those that would have been explored in the years to come, a sector that would allow them to prosper and flourish. Upon seeing this sector the leader of the Helod Corporation and the new ruler of this newly founded nation uttered just three words: Dream of Eternity.
Those words later began to represent the name of this sector and of its people: the Talar.

In later years the Talar prospered and grew in strength and beauty but they lived in peace not having much in the way of a military except the police squads and even these were few and far between, however this did not stop the Talar from founding a secret service and special highly trained combat force.
The main purpose of the secret service was to spy on the other races and make sure that they would not find their hidden home. The purpose of the special forces was to make sure that IF the other races would come too close to their sector they would employ what ever means necessary to avoid being found, until one day when everything changed….
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Post by Warenwolf » Sun, 13. Aug 06, 12:07

Nice to see a new story here on the forum.

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Post by Khaak_Hammer » Sun, 13. Aug 06, 15:40

VERY nice looking

I hope this go's far

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Post by Star_Raider15 » Mon, 14. Aug 06, 08:26

lol thnx guys gonna see wot i can do to chapter 1 its about half finished
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