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Xenon + Khakk war story

Post by steveo1259 » Fri, 19. May 06, 21:14

this is the first 2 chapters to my story and i hope you like it

Prologue

The argon had twelve of there own ships, 3 battle ships or M0’s, 2 carriers, 5 destroyers and about 200 fighters, Mostly M3’s, the boron had also brought there ships with them and they had 1 cruiser, 1 carrier and 2 Mark 5 Ray destroyers. Also 100 fighters. The Teldi had brought 1 carrier. The spilt had let the argon borrow 10 battle ships and 2 carriers full of fighters and the paranoid had 6 covertters.

Now you may be wondering what the 5 races where doing with so many ships together in one sector, well it started about a jazura ago when the force federation found a new sector a started to defend it and build new stations in that sector.

When the races found out that force had cheated their bank systems they had frozen all his funds, after that they took half of the argon fleet to destroy his control of that system, but they did it eventually with only light loses.

100 tazuras later it became clear that there was another gate in the sector because the argon federation got a message saying thaqt the sector was under attack by KHAKK and the XENON at the same time. They didn’t know whether thay had formed an alliance or just fought togheter.

It became clear 2 tazura later when a Xenon destroyer made a gateless jump into the middle of argon prime and managed to jump out again before it could be destroyed.

This is where our story starts. The Guilds have discovered the location of the Khakk and Xenon Homeworld, they where both in the same system.

So the races got as many ships as they could get there hands on and placed them infront of the gate for a final assault on the joint home-sector.

In total there are about 630 ships going into battle on the good side alone. That’s a big force.
Because it was a home-sector the battle was going to be unfair but the 5 races had shared technology with each other and the argon had been working on a mobile battle fortress, it would be there in a couple of mizura and then they where going to go through. Now every capitol ship had beam lasers so they matched the Khakk and twice the shielding and speed of the previous versions.

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Post by steveo1259 » Sat, 20. May 06, 22:41

first chapter here,

Chapter 1( and so the battle begins again)

“Admiral we have entered system Races End.”
“thank you lieutenant”
“ open coms to all allied ships”
“ comms open sir”
“ this is Admiral of the fleet, we except to have heavy loses but eradicate the Xenon and Khakk home-worlds. What would you rather have. No loses and constant loses in all our sectors thanks to this gateless jump technology or destroy them today and save the lives of millions of people. What would you rather do. Lives or loses. Today we will beat all our enemies. And today we win all our wars because we are no longer weak, we have come together to break our enemies and we will beat them, we have over 600 ships at our command and we will not lose.

Now lets kick some butt, but first we need a formation. To go through the gate, we will have the battle fortress go through first then the carriers and the crusiers, then the destroyers, by the way any fighters to dock at there mother ships now, then the battle ships and the coverettes can flak the carriers.

Then once we are on the other side of the gate we go into a horzontail formation say the battle fortress in the middle and then the battle ships and then the carriers and so on. 3KM sepertation. 50 seconds separation between jumps. Everyone set speed to 150Mps and follow us through the gate”

“we will be at the gate in 50 sezura sir”
“thank you”

(5 mizura later)

“that’s the last of the fleet in the sector admiral”
“where are the Xenon and Khakk, this doesn’t make sense, fleet move into position”

A slight disturbance on the screen disturbs the admiral, then another disturbs the person at navigation.

“admiral, did you see that,”
“OH MY GOD, sneaky bastards, activate cloak detector now,”

A moment later and the big wall screen flickers and then shows two massive fleets of Xenon ad Khakk moving towards them, at least 1000 ships if not more.

“ admiral to fleet, they are cloaked, but they have their shields down, and cannot activate their shields unless they drop their cloaks, they cannot know we know where they are, remember all ships concertrate on 1 ship first then another and so on.
All fighters to launch now and attack, you do not have enemy fighters to worry about so target all you can on the target,”

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Post by Mastermue » Sat, 20. May 06, 23:33

8) Massive battle alert! Exciting start and a cliffhanger...... Can't wait for the next part! :D

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Post by DIGSIN » Sun, 21. May 06, 01:58

Sounds interesting.

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Post by steveo1259 » Mon, 22. May 06, 22:18

thanks guys, i'm half way through writing chapter 2, another couple of days should do it and then i'l be able to post it

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Post by steveo1259 » Mon, 29. May 06, 13:20

almost done with chapter 2

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Post by steveo1259 » Tue, 30. May 06, 21:16

next chapter, hope you like it, do plz e-mail me on christopher@cwoolman.freeserve.co.uk if you would like to change it atall


Chapter 2 ( lifes lost )

“ 1 mizaura to target” announced the computer
“50 secs”
“40 secs”
“20 secs”
“10 secs”
“5 secs”
“ target reached”

“all guns fire now” shouted the admiral

All at once the Xenon dropped their cloaks and raised their shields and then half a second later, the Admirals fleet fired one thousand plasma shots at the xenon cruiser, at the same time the xenon fired the same amount of shots at the Argon One, the was pride of the Argon fleet until the mobile battle fortress came along, the Argon One survived barely, the top right thruster blew up and the docking port was instantly rendered useless.

The xenon cruiser was not so lucky, the first hundred shots destroyed the shield generators and the next nine hundred shots completely destroyed it, the explosion was at-least a kilometer big in every direction. It was so bright that every screen and sensor was instantly blinded for a minute and when they cleared the xenon fleet had disappeared, but the Khakk fleet was still there and closing fast, (remember their beam lasers had a longer range than the Admiral’s fleet)

“ everyone engage secondary targets,”
The capital ships spilt into four groups, one half corvettes and half of the destroyers, the next group consisted of half of the battle cruisers and the carriers, the third group where the other half of the battle cruisers and the mobile battle fortress, and the fourth group was anything that hadn’t been assigned a group, the fighters just spread out between their capital ships and began pounding the Khakk fighters.

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Post by KiwiNZ » Wed, 31. May 06, 13:12

That is some massive battle there :D I wonder where the Xenon have gone. A fall-back to the planet?

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Post by steveo1259 » Fri, 2. Jun 06, 11:00

no, but im not giving anything away, next part coming up soon probaly this weekend

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Post by steveo1259 » Sat, 3. Jun 06, 15:24

next installment here, bet your all hooked in now, anywhey hope you all enjoy, plz post reply if you liked it

Chapter 3 ( battle ruse)

The argon one had only just recovered when the shields where hit once by an M5 Khakk fighter and suddenly they just dropped, no shields, then the engines cut out, next the weapons system and then the core started to breach,

Now you see these new upgrades, they came at a price for now. That price was that to keep the shields up ( super shields ) the ships needed Newtonian reactors, which when are over-loaded like what just happened on the argon one, ( the power feedback ) begin to tear a sub-space hole in space and the ship while have about three minutes to explode ( fireworks ).

“ Admiral to fleet, move away at max speed away from argon one, its goin to blow, try to lure the khakk ships to follow you and get some of them caught in the blast,”

“argon one to explode on 5, 4, 3, 2, 1 argon one explode imminent,”

Out in space the four thrusters blew off in giant blue explosion’s and then the nose of the used to be argon flagship blew clean off, secondary explosions ripped out of the hull and then the ship actually exploded, when the explosion cleared there was Cleary nothing left of it.

( 2 mizuars earlier )

“get us out of here pierson,”
“ yes admiral,”
The battle fortress began turning slowly around, and accelerating as it went,
“ admiral, we’re not going to make it, are we, at least not without our shields heavily depleted and minor hull damage.”
Every ship was now running at full speed away from the Argon One, in the order of the most damage to the ships, so all the M5’s where first and then all the M4’s and so on,

Then it happened, the argon one exploded, all the fighters where thrown about space rocking and rolling until their frantic pilots could force their ships on to a controlled roll, the capital ships where not so lucky, the M2’s where instantly shield crippled with hull breaches in the habitat sections of the ship, the M1’s where defenseless as the turrets had given up after being thrown about in space so much, the M0’s had half their shields depleted but where recovering quickly, they had got off lucky, the battle fortress was a different matter, it had somehow been flung halfway across the sector but it was untouched in battle damage.

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Post by Zeustaco » Sun, 4. Jun 06, 18:14

So..... what's the finish?when will chapter 4 come?If you could put this story in game it would be super cool. :lol:

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Post by steveo1259 » Sun, 4. Jun 06, 20:00

CHAPTER 4 here, hope you like it, just started writing chapter 5, its called Destruction.

Chapter 4 ( discovery )

The blast blinded every sensors for 2 minutes, the Khakk had in that time rounded up what fighters they could fit into the few capital ships they had left from being caught in the explosion and engaged their planetary thrusters and where now just fast moving stars, heading for their home planet.

The Xenon however where being themselves and had cloaked when their cruiser had blown up and had retreated to allow them-selves to re-group and recharge, but they where back now and had surrounded the Admirals fleet, what was worst was they had their cloaks up and half of them had disabled weapons to get half of their maximum shield strength up.

The battle fortress dropped an advanced nav-sat and began broadcasting to the fleet,
“ Admiral to fleet, you don’t have cloak detectors, we will relay what we see to your navigation and tactical officers, order them to shoot at will and our combat AI will try to coordinate you.”

Immediately the fleet broke up, every ship formed up with a partner, even the capital ships. The mobile battle fortress was making its way across the sector on shield to engine after-burner, it had three quarters of its Original shield strength and it was still accelerating, way past the two-thousand mark and it was over half way there, it wasn’t going to stop in time.

Suddenly the fleet deployed twelve rings, the battle fortress was almost here now, it had cut its engines but was still way past the five-thousand mark and it was heading straight for the rings, the rings came to life to emit a strange orange glow and then the battle fortress entered the first ring and its speed was instantly taken away from it, the hull started glowing red as the friction of the stopper rings, on the tenth ring the battle cruiser stopped, the hull now had the brightness of a small red star and the hull temperature was at five-hundred degrees but in the cold vast of space it was being reduced quite quickly.

Then the third battle really began.

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